Research
papers are getting harder to read, comprehend
Since only peers
and specialists read the whole paper, it is vital that the abstract be readable
and understandable by all
One of the all-time most important scientific research
publications is Charles Darwin’s “On the Origin of Species”, published in 1859.
It was not a paper but a whole book. It was readable and understandable not
only by biologists, but by mathematicians, philosophers, historians and the
“lay public” as well. Alas, today’s scientific reports are increasingly
becoming unreadable and incomprehensible even by peer groups. “The readability
of scientific texts is decreasing over time”, write a group of neuroscientists
from the Karolinska Institute, Stockholm, Sweden (Plaven-Sigray et al. eLife
2017; 6:e27725).
The group analysed the language of the abstracts of as
many as 7,09,577 papers published over the last 34 years – between 1880 and
2015. Note that they analysed not only the whole texts of the research papers
but their abstracts as well. An abstract describes in a nutshell the main
message of the paper — what the question is, what methods were used to address
the question, what the results obtained were, and what the salient conclusions
have been. Thus, an abstract is meant for not the specialists in the same field
alone, but for non-specialists and interested readers as well. It, in effect,
offers the reader the “take home” message. Only specialists and fellow
researchers, interested in the area of research of the publication read the
whole paper in all its sections. It is thus vital that the abstract be readable
and understandable by all.
How to measure
this?
How does one measure and quantify “readability”? Way
back in 1948, one Dr. R Flesch published a ‘yardstick’ of readability for the
English language texts. It was based on (a) the number of syllables per word
and (b) the number of words in each sentence. The Flesch Readability Ease (FRE)
is between 100-90 for a typical 5th grade schoolchild in the US. (The sentence
“A cat sat on a mat” has an FRE of 110, easily understood by a primary
schoolchild). The magazine Readers Digest has an FRE of 65, understood by high
school students and beyond. The Harvard Business Review, on the other hand, has
a value of 30. The “Harvard Business Review” (with its complex and specialised
technical language) has an FRE of 30. Thus, the lower the FRE the harder the
readability.
Likewise, the FRE of scientific abstracts published
way back in 1880 was found to be around 30. But, over the years, it has fallen
down to as low as 10 today. Worryingly, as many as 1.6 lakh abstracts (close to
20% of all journal articles) have FRE of zero (0). An M.Sc. graduate may not be
able to understand them. Leave alone specialised journals (with their specialised
terms and jargon), this appears to be true of even “general” journals such as
Nature or Science. The mean syllables per word has also shot up almost twofold
and the number of difficult words (counted as NDC) has gone up from 35% to over
50%, particularly during the last 60 years, making readability increasingly
difficult.
Why has this difficulty arisen in the readability? The
authors suggest two possibilities. One is that the number of co-authors has
gone up with time. Indeed, we seldom see a single-author paper (only perhaps in
mathematics?). Many of the co-authors want their say in the text — the classic
cooks and broth situation. The other appears to be a general increase in the
scientific (and linguistic) jargon, and hence a vocabulary that has become a
language in itself (they call it “science-ese”, I see a similarity here with
“legal-ese”). Interestingly, it is not only scientific jargon even other words
such as “novel”, “robust”, “significant”, “district”, “underlying”, and
“suggestive” are used increasingly these days.
Same conclusions drawn by the Karolinska group are
worth quoting. They write: “Lower readability implies less accessibility,
particularly for non-specialists, such as journalists, policy makers and the
wider public... scientific credibility can sometimes suffer when reported by
journalists... further, amidst concerns that modern societies are becoming less
stringent with actual truths, replaced with true-sounding “post-facts”...
science should be advancing our most accurate knowledge. One suggestion from the
field is to create accessible “lay summaries.” Another proposal is to make
scientific communication a necessary part of undergraduate and graduate
education.” (This last suggestion is particularly true for India, where mastery
over English, the lingua franca of today’s science, needs to be improved
badly.)
Finally, the authors did a self-analysis of their own
paper and found it has a FRE score of 49, and its abstract 40. I hope my own
report here fares higher!
Seminar
presentations
It is already difficult to read and comprehend a
published paper. One would think listening to it in a seminar might make it
easier. Alas, no. These days the speaker uses the modern device called
Powerpoint, which makes it worse. Each slide is filled from top to bottom with
words and pictures. More often than not, they are ‘copy and paste’ jobs from
the paper. Given that the lights are dimmed, each slide brimful and the speaker
drones on and on, the whole thing is soporific. Just as FRE and NDC, there are
factors such as aspect ratio, font size, number of lines per slide, and colour
contrast which make Powerpoint presentations attractive. And just as we want
courses and workshops in scientific writing, we need to have classes and
workshops on oral presentations, using audiovisual aids. If this does not
happen, do not blame us if we fall asleep during seminars.
Source | The Hindu | 16 September 2017
Regards!
Librarian
Rizvi Institute of Management
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